Fragile Life
As tender as the wind wafted petals
And those shimmering dew drops
Those bubbling streams serenading
The contours of the bank
This life of ours how fragile
A tear drop down the cheek
Of hurts, hopes and dreams
A heart that breaks easily
With violence and words
Sewing it to seamlessness
How fragile the earth we live on
Gathering those million pieces
Scattering them like dandelion seeds
Waiting to nurture them from death
Streams that end in waterfalls
Fire breathing mountains
Spreading ash and putrid clouds
Destruction and rebirth
A new life from old
A fragile world in the making
Over and over again…
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Hi Typs,
Nice to see you here. Glad you liked the esssence of the poem...
Life and the world is fragile....:)
Thanks!
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hey blizzard,
i liked the essence of this poem... and the fact that you kept it simply around that fragility!
nice.
-t!
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Hello Yash,
Thank you so much :) :)
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Hi Bina
Thanks sweets for liking it...You bring cheer always
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How life can be described more beautiful than these words
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blizzy
this one is beautiful
loved it
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Sampathji,
Your comments are always right on the mark and very beautifully worded!
Thank you as always, :)
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the ephemeral nature of reality, life and death
the moving moments of feeling (pain, sorrow ,mirth , happiness)
and the death, the inevitable ender of stability lurking at every corner of life
is indeed a proof or our fragility....
you have brought the concept out so well....
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